A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 76 Discussion

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  • #1
I like everything so far but the MC gets annoying at times.

He cusses a lot and takes a belligerent attitude when he gets offended, which happens a lot.

A lot of his inner monologue gets rather toxic and judgmental whenever he makes an opinionated analysis on anybody who isn't his friend.

It doesn't help that 80% of the novel's content it his inner monologue, while 10% is conversation, and the last 10% is the world-building narrator.
 
  • #3
I loved this book! I cannot wait for the next book!
 
  • #5
oh my God this is so cool.... waiting for further chapters
 
  • #7
great story, lost 2 stars for grammatical errors
 
  • #8
Why you keep birds feeding me with these chapters!!!!!! I’m dying sis!!!! I’m on the edge of my seat and I need MORE!!!!!!!!!
 
  • #9
I absolutely love it. I was concerned at first. Because it seemed to bounced around. Damien's Pov put in prospective. After that I couldn't wait for updates. Can't wait for future books.❤❤❤
 
  • #11
It’s a very interesting book! I really like it.
 
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