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I like everything so far but the MC gets annoying at times.He cusses a lot and takes a belligerent attitude when he gets offended, which happens a lot.A lot of his inner monologue gets rather toxic and judgmental whenever he makes an opinionated analysis on anybody who isn't his friend.It doesn't help that 80% of the novel's content it his inner monologue, while 10% is conversation, and the last 10% is the world-building narrator.