A Demon Lord’s Tale: Dungeons, Monster Girls, and Heartwarming Bliss Chapter 98 Discussion

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  • #1
Honestly, it's a decent enough read. But that's only if you can manage to get past the mc's suuuuuuper cringy way of speaking. It's not like the MC has to speak in uptight proper english (japanese) all the time but Jesus Christ.

The aurhor tries way too hard to make the MC speak in super-urban jargon all the time and it goes way past the point of being corny to being straight up cringe. It's like the MC is your 90's uncle that's trying to be "hip" and "cool" with the kids by constanly speaking like a 2011 milenial

Other than that tho, it's a decent enough SOL that isn't too heavy on wish-fulfillment.
 
  • #2
This book made me smile... Naughty and funnt at the same time.five start
 
  • #3
Loved it!!!   Great story to the end!!!  Thanks so much
 
  • #5
I was enjoying the three chapters arday hahaha....It's all good anyway. But why do I feel the chapters are short or I'm getting too eager to know what's next
 
  • #7
Book is so far fetched but honestly am just happy Stella still about. No doubt we’ve loads of drama coming up but I really can’t wait to see what happened Gwen. Jesikka I agree I would of really loving the truth of Zachs death to come out!
 
  • #10
4 chapters that was amazing! We all hope you can do more sooner than later
 
  • #12
Loved this book!!!! Loved the various POVs and the set up for the upcoming books! This book is so well written that I cried like a baby with the feelings Cass inspired with her writing
 
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