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Im going to complain but this is a good plot. I meant the plot had the potential to develop more. But the whole story--how the author uses that plot--nah.The story is super slow, in terms of development of the plot. Author keep on using characters in repeat and unnecessarily. One character name rosalyn, was often used. At first I thought she was a servant or commoner cuz the way they acted but they started to call her lady. I know nobles looked down on people who are not noble. But FL is a princess and an actual biological daughter of the emperor. Nobles value etiquette and their faces but somehow this group of court ladies, dont. They ARE rude and just plain annoying. While FL just do nothing, ignore them and uses words to face slap them and then repeat. It's the same with the knights it was not enough that one of the knight got broken nose and was in prison. MISSING, after what he said to his princess. They do what they want and FL just fcking don't care. I get it that FL dont care (in literally everything except when its about her) but the author do same thing over and over again, in the same characters and in the same context. It become unnecessary and simply annoying. It was prolonged.Secondly, idk if this is on the translator but the more I read about their 'quest' onto making the scalpel the more I thought that the blacksmith should be called craftsman. Blacksmith are known to do weapons and armors. They are rough, burly amd uses hammer and heat. Blacksmith dont have the meticulous details such as craftsman but this one employee can make small things like accessories, that scalpel and sht, like a craftsman.Also may I add scalpel wasn't the biggest issue in surgery it was the exposure of our insides, our body would hav trauma. The invasive thing. Risk of sepsis. Our organs are not meant to be exposed. That's why surgery mainly done in a controlled room.She should just invented antiseptic solutions, that would be a game changer. Just alcohol would be really helpful, but I guess its alrdy existed in that world. Or even gloves if she may. Cuz scalpel only do is to cut. Yes it was all true about the list she made how scalpel could help but really its minimal.What I like the most is how FL doesn't care. But also what I hate the most cuz I like things to be done quickly. She was ab*sed multiple times by the people from her own kingdom but never really deal with them. She just let them shouts at her, scold her say things in front of her or behind her just cuz ShE DoEsn't cArE. Ugh.Dont get me wrong this is good. Just manage ur expectations. I recommend reading this. Cuz if you dont like it then we suffer together. But just try this and then judge it.
