I Became the Terminally Ill Tyrant’s Doctor Chapter 10 Discussion

  • #1
The story is fine and looks cute, strong willed empress meets selfless hero, but it's kinda killed by a below average translation.

It's not awful overall, but it has awkward/wooden dialogues (at some point almost all of them), and for a story relying on character interactions, it makes it worse than what it could have been.

Random examples :

"It'll take a while." -> "It's taking a while."

"... Diagnosis is finished." -> "Alright, I finished my diagnosis."

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'The effects seem to be there.' -> 'It seemed to have been effective.'
 
  • #2
loved the book. excellent writing. all the characters meshed well together.
 
  • #3
the author of the Caraval book series should sue. there is so much of this plot that was stolen from the series.
 
  • #4
i do love it so far, but needs clarity before purchasing
 
  • #7
Kept me on the edge of my seat. Eagerly awaiting the sequel...
 
  • #8
I have a hard time putting it down
 
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