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The initial story was enjoyable at first with the setup and getting to know the characters, but by the chapters in the 70s the quality and grammar of the translations began to noticeably decline along with the names of the characters becomes less and less consistent as they go on.The later on the story arcs also kept getting dragged out. The earlier chapter arcs may have been wrapped up in about 3-4 chapters each, but the later ones may end up being even more than double that with the pacing of the extended chapters feeling like a drag. As for the MC's personality:Spoiler
The MC's personality also felt like it was becoming less and less proactive as the story went on compared to near the beginning.
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