When an Adventurer Exits the Dungeon, They Become Just an Ordinary Person Chapter v113 Discussion

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  • #1
The story feels very flat and the elements of magic/level system are rather poorly displayed. The protagonist seems to more a player in front of the computer rather than living within the story. If he feels nothing when his magic points are 2/60 and he oblivously can call forth without any problems and consequences magic it makes it seem more like button pushing rather than using a skill.
 
  • #3
can someone tell me if there would be a chapter where they explain while Carl would keep that evil girl as his fiancee? because it's so absurd for him to keep her when he knows she is such a snake ... i'm so tired of this
 
  • #5
hey its maybe kinda creepy but do you want to read a story then I have just started righting one it would be amazing if you guys can check that out and tell me about how you feel
 
  • #8
Why am I just realizing the name of the characters I just had a very slow moment no lie
 
  • #9
As always you did not disappointed me. I stopped reading this book when you started book 4th of the Alpha series. Can’t wait for the sequel to come out.
 
  • #10
Wow.  Great story line so far.. I love it already.
 
  • #11
Love this couple! A sweet story of opposites, healing, and redemption. You won’t be disappointed!
 
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