- #1
I’m dropping this but I have a few concerns. The author clearly lacks the skills to construct a plot. The writing itself reminds me when I wrote my first chapter which was obviously god awful. There are a lot of random events that have no connection to each other. They somewhat do, in a very large picture, but the execution is atrocious. You can just read two sentences in the middle and probably move on to the next chapter.which leads to my next concern, if the plot will be so weak the characters should be the main focus, but they are not. They aren’t complex and honestly they just have one personality trait...I didn’t mean to rate this, but I miss clicked and I don’t know how to clear the star rating so...
