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The story reaches its peak at volumes 6, 7, 8.From that point forward, it just lost it tempo, feel stagnant and don’t carry the same weight and seriousness. Many activities and events have nothing to do with the situation where time is precious and humanity and MC’s acquaintances at stakes.Romance events starts take place just to edge the reader and serve nothing to develop character’s dynamics. In a world where everyone is virg*n, from 5000 years old cave man to 80 years old loli professor, I just think it would be better without the romance. After all (500 chapters), these events always end with “he a fool/he so dense”, nothing gains.It has very good characters insight. You get to explore and discover about the personality of the old soul MC. How he thinks, learns, lives and fights, an interesting journey. However, at some point, you will notice that you want to see him develop too, not on level or strength but mental and action. Unfortunately, very little to none dynamic events serve that purpose. Everyone is the same from the moment they were introduce to the end.Comedy is another good point and it should be if it not gets repeated. Most of comedy comes from interaction between Asley and Pochi, which gradually feels forced by the author just to provided lame joke. Still funny but out of place.World building is a bit vauge, mainly because of the lack of authority government, military and political differences and it’s affects between area and nation. But this is not a isekai so it doesn’t have to show every corner of the world. I think it Ok with 3 to 4 major area.Plot hole andSpoiler[collapse] plot armor is frequently meet as the story process, don't think about it too much if you want to continue enjoy it.Overall, it’s a good run, long, light and neat, very easy to consume and spend some of your time on it.
