Unfairly Fired From the Healer’s Guild After Five Years of Dedicated Service – Despite Always Being the Weakest, With My Super-Ultimate Skill in Hand, I Aim to Become the Strongest! Chapter 120 Discussion

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  • #1
This WN is 80% word padding. Constant recaps, explaining the obvious, MC's repetitive internal monologues. Progress in the first 100 chapters is hair tearingly slow.

MC is a robot. Cast is forgettable. LitRPG system is half-assed; MC's unique skill works like you'd expect it to in a game-like system, but there are no levels etc.

It's like the beginning of a xianxia WN where the MC is secretly taking magic herbs to advance, but the word padding is stretched to infinity.

 
  • #3
The hero in this story has raped this women no less then 3 times and I’m less then 1/5 into the book.
 
  • #4
I'm in love with revenge books like this.  Great work Author
 
  • #5
the continuity  has not been maintained.  nice storyline disturbed by loss of story track. names of characters jumbled. shanaya shares her first kiss when they came to India.. his parents where dead in the starting. now they are on a holiday. many chapters  have been simply repeated. cash waste.
 
  • #7
love this book but can't get \"Hey There Casanova \" to load
 
  • #8
I loved the book!  Not a typical romance and full of human emotion.
 
  • #9
I have published a new book recently. It is about possessive love, if you want to feel trapped by a powerful mafia while falling in love with someone else, the book “chains of desire, bond of love” is for you. Check the book to find out~
 
  • #11
I am so thankful for your willingness to share your stories with us. This whole series has been amazing and this story in particular is absolutely captivating. Well done! I'm looking forward to Reid's story <3
 
  • #12
come on!! it's been too long since you wrote
 
  • #13
Absolutely loving the book, can’t wait for the next chapters ...
 
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