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Revised:Story:It's decent, not great not bad. It's a solid 3. Nana and those around her has a background, there's reasons why Nana starts playing the VRMMO. So there is "threads" going through the story which it's trying to deliver, it just takes AGES to get anywhere.At the heart of the story however, is a characters journey in an MMO and how it changes her life as a result. Just be warned, it's a slow story.Writing:It's inconsistent. Sometime it's good, sometimes it's really bad.It's the weakest point of the Novel by far and I think the story suffers from it.It feels simplistic in a very bad way. And the method it uses to narrate the story is also meh.Characters:They got some flesh on them, Rinne and Nana is by far the most fleshed out by chapter 90, though there's others too.Both Nana and Rinne is interesting characters. Nana has past trauma to deal with while Rinne is hinted to have feelings for Nana. Their relationship is also not normal.Recommended?Eh..... There's better Shoujo Ai, VRMMO and slife of life novels out there. Maybe not all in one though :PI'd give it a try if the genre interest you and you want a relaxing Novel to read, just beware it has some dark bit to it.