The Only Thing That Reached Out to Me, Who Was Broken, Was Your Hand Chapter -- Discussion

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Overall decent, but not great.

It's similar to numerous other stories out there. Good person gets treated badly by everyone for no damned reason (misunderstandings, false accusations, whatever), and is already broken by the time everything gets cleared up. Friends and family feel terrible for not believing/protecting the MC, MC gets super popular but is too broken to care, stuff happens, MC heals. It's a template, but it's a template I like :-P

The title is a little misleading, he had one person who supported him during the "bad times", and he even says he's alive because of her support. But he gets support from several people after the false accusations are cleared.

There are some unbelievable or VERY unlikely parts of the story, but if you can look past that the story itself is decent. For instance, he's cleared of being a mol*ster due to a lack of DNA evidence? The Author watched too many crime shows. Now if you told me that someone checked a security camera after the fact, a witness came forward to say he was innocent, etc, I'd believe it. DNA is just silly.
 
  • #3
Loved it! A lot of spelling errors but who cares I still loved it!
 
  • #5
First time I see that a book doesn't have a direction.  By the time, the author decide to say the truth, the interest would be lost. From day 1, we knew Hylda and Albert killed Renee. We just didn't know how and why. It was enjoyable unforlding that. But here, everyone is blind and it's frustrating
 
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see the chapters at 2k almost 3k. i defenitely cant fin8shed reading this  . though i am loving to read more . yet i cant i expect that the books here is free to read , but needed to top up. huhuhu waiting for another day to read just 2 9r 3 chapters...
 
  • #9
Absolutely Loved these stories!  Amazing writing Author!!!
 
  • #12
Glad to see Alexs Mum has come around Mark needs to Stop and be happy
 
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