The Subplot Of This Novel Is Peculiar Chapter 85 Discussion

  • #1
Gosh, the way the author keeps jumping timelines gives me a headache. I'm not sure which scenes came first at times because of how the author keeps recalling old memories. I'm getting a whiplash over the POVs as well. Seems like an interesting story but the execution is a little... meh.

There are some parts I enjoyed. Like how the MC sorted out how he felt and the readers didn't have to get dragged through a million chapters before we got a resolution.

For prospect readers, if you can grit your teeth and push through all the errors of translation and a confusing author, then maybe you'll find something good I guess. Goodluck tho.
 
  • #2
I just started reading your book but I already love it. It's like it has an aura of peace around it. Great Job.
 
  • #5
So good ! Got me hooked! Read all in one day ! More pl
 
  • #7
Too bad for FL I cannot stop giving you this low star
 
  • #8
It was a bit tired some to wait for additional chapter overall it is a great story
 
  • #12
I loved this book,Im always looking forward everyday for new chapters,hoping to finished reading it till d end,and I hope Mr.C and Brandi ends up with each other❤️❤️❤️
 
  • #13
This last update is to unbelievable, no one expects to read a book that request it’s readers to be brain dead to understand. It’s insulting!
 
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