I Became the Villain’s Own Daughter Chapter 470 Discussion

I'm MTLing this btw

I'm a big sucker for the "big shot ceo cold hearted dad raises a little bun" type of stories so I'm a little biased, but I also thought that the novel was hilarious and heartwarming at times. As of where I am, I still think the novel is a 4, but I honestly wish the author would wrap up the story faster. Right now the novel seems to be more about character interactions than plot, and we have only just gotten introduced to all the main characters (I think)

Pros

• • I think the interactions between the MC and her family members are hilarious

• • The plot that we're getting is pretty interesting so far. Spoiler

    There are a lot of different elements in the story that mesh with each other such as various characters experiencing various types of rebirth, as well as systems, cannon fodder villains, heroines that turn s*upid and evil after receiving knowledge of the future (novel plot), amnesia reincarnation, etc

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• • It's your typical sand sculpture novel, where they don't dwell on anything sad or depressing for too long, so it's good for a light hearted read.

• • Some of the character pairings in this novel are really cute, and I hope they develop more on them because they get really little screen time.
  • They didn't make the father change all of a sudden into a super doting, all tolerant dad. Even though he does treat the MC differently, he's still really childlike and petty and get's exasperated at her a lot to the point where he wants to strangle here (which is relatable honestly)

Cons

• • some jokes seem to drag on way too long

• • the MC cries way too often, and it was funny at first but the longer it drags on the more annoying it starts to get. (Which is actually probably just an accurate portrayal of toddlers and just me getting annoyed at toddlers lol) I hope this will change as she gets older.

• • The plot moves at a super glacier pace. I hope I get to a time skip or something because it seems like the kids are perpetually stuck at age 3 in kindergarten and I really would like to move on...
  • All the characters seem to vary in their age maturity from way too mature to way too childish. I legit thought the ML was like, 14 or 18 for half the chapters until I saw somewhere where they specifically mention he's 7.
  • OP ness is too OP sometimes...