The Love Story of A Passerby Chapter 28 Discussion

  • Thread starter Warmaisach
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  • #15
I like it... can't tell what will happen second to second.
 
  • #16
I wonder how long this will last until this truth comes out. 5 years, maybe never like all the other shit Guinevere has done. I hate this family so badly. Weston needs to make Guinevere, Chris, and Warren pay. I don't care if he's old. How can the hospital be so stupid? they should have noticed..
 
  • #17
this has a lot of promise, good characters just need more building, poor editing, lacks some depth
 
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