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There is an A-story and B-story. MC's has a career and lives her life to the fullest thanks to the people who see her potential. I like the world building and her skills as a homemaker.The B-story is her home life with her brother and Mr. Snail (Poly or FC, Five Colors). Mr. Snail can't leave the premises, so if the MC wanted to make home elsewhere. He can't stop her, and can't help but nag at her to clean at the beginning. He's demanding to balance out MC's reluctance at the beginning. He's the house administrator or house fairy. The house deteriorates with emotional upheaval and will have occasional 'bugs' or events that will require the homeowners attention.Interesting concept, sensible characters. There is little conflict and is a slice of life with the urgency of being a hunter setting. Lacking complexity.
