My Girlfriend is a Zombie Chapter 301 Discussion

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Surprisingly a lot worse than I expected it to be. A strange way to start a review, but considering the rating you would expect at least some sort of superior story telling, for a web novel of course. But instead what this novel relies the most is the fan service and the mature scenes that start appearing at some point.

Maybe some will say that it's a zombie story, that it doesn't really matter how the interaction between the characters unfold behind the scenes as long as the action is dope... Well, the fan service never stops, there is always some sort of scene in the middle of an action scene where the protagonist makes a remark about the opponents body parts or where at some point is mol*sting them. And this is just the beginning...

Not forgetting about the story we move back to the world of zombies where we expect to see something at least a little more special. Sadly, if you read 50 chapters you can also say you read 300 or maybe more. The author has given up on creating a clear image of the surroundings, so we get university A, B, C, D etc, within city A, B, C, D where you can find at a few minutes distance a navy base, a military research base, a huge lake, a zoo, and many other places of interest like pharmacies and so on between which the protagonist can almost insta travel.

Dangerous zombies at some point no longer appear unless the protagonist is not engaging in some sort of mission. And most of the times the action scenes are the fights between the weaker characters against the zombie before the protagonist start his super hero appearance.

The protagonist is not someone special beside a relatively interesting power up, he is plain and most people ignored him before the end of the world. So how come he is suddenly able to face any type of situation with a calm demeanor? Our author describes this period of transition as the week when he had to learn to sleep half awake to keep the connection between him and the zombies. Now onto the love interest, as this is one of the main reasons he was able to become stronger. Our protagonist was for some reason taken care by a campus belle, the most beautiful person in an university for those not familiar with the term. He of course manages to find her after the end of the world, and she is a zombie of course. But not any type of zombie, but one that had already evolved. A coincidence, but well, one that we can move on from. But, this is the starting point of the coincidences which are of course the *drum noise* cliches:

  • 99% of zombies that are strong and capable are women
  • He is of course not going to only stick with the original love interest
  • Most humans left alive are dumb AF and the protagonist needs to save their asses
  • We move from one location to another but the events always unfold the same
  • The protagonist AF towards any men but he is willing to jump through fire if its a woman who asks for help
  • Lastly, any form of *liquid" from his zombie partners is a boost up for the protagonist.
That's about all, but this describes almost 90% of everything you can read in this story. The other 10 percent is the interaction between characters which at times is good and at times is boring AF. My rating will stick to 1 star and I'm giving up on it forever. Lastly I propose another name for this novel - "My necrophilia adventures"
 
  • #3
author please let us know when will he know that eva is his mate
 
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Hi ! i have a full chapter o.f this sto.ry P.M me directly on mesenger ...
 
  • #9
Love the book. Didn't like the ending.  Hoping book 2 makes up for it.
 
  • #10
it just got started then we have to wait for more
 
  • #12
I have read almost all of this author's Completed works loved every single one!!
 
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