The Healer Demands Payment! Chapter 29.1 Discussion

  • Thread starter Lelel
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Originally I thought it would be as the synopsis implies, where she steadily ends up earning money and felling over MLs (without really meaning to) and eventually becomes rich. I was also hoping orig!ML would end up being her ML.

Unfortunately, that's not what this story is. Putting aside how the heck she found such a master just lying around, and why on earth he was willing to stick with her, I also didn't like the other main concept of the story.

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The MLs randomly regain their memories of their previous life at some point which makes them love our MC and turn away from orig!FL because they end up remembering her lifesaving favours from the past life. However, this just means they end up falling for her super quick, and I really like the process of falling for each other. Thus it's really unfortunate.

Furthermore, the master is someone that didn't belong in the "original story". I personally don't like when that happens because true stories always set the most powerful handsome guy as the ML, so how could this even better person suddenly pop out?? It also makes absolutely no sense to me how they got close... our MC is really a good person, but it really doesn't explain how they got THAT close.

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All that said, the story is still quite interesting. Translating team does a great job, and our MC is a good girl (albeit incre~dibly Mary Sue). This story is really a perspective thing; orig!FL seems annoying but that's only because we get the perspective of MC. From another perspective, MC would be the one that's a crazy mary sue.

Edit: The more I read, the more Mary Sue she is, and more important the more powerful her old master becomes. Like I just can't get around the fact that somehow she found this super incredibly powerful and talented and also world-shockingly handsome master just lying around, and didn't really think anything of it...? idk man I just find it so ridiculous
 
  • #3
When will there be more Chapters!!!! Love this book
 
  • #6
Coulde be a really good book whith a littel clean up and a REAL ending becours that ending was NOT the way you end a book!
 
  • #7
Hello everyone. The update will take time as my exams are going on, will try to update this weekend but there is no guarantee of it.
 
  • #8
I really enjoyed the book great story
 
  • #9
I loved this book but I feel sorry for Jeremy.  please update when book 2 is ready.  I can't wait to read what happens next.  you are a great author that keeps  a person's interest.  I couldn't put it down.
 
  • #11
Enjoyed this book! Fast paced with interesting story: love triangle, betrayal and a murder/kidnapping mystery mixed in!!
 
  • #13
adult men in love/lust with a 14 year old is absolutely abhorrent. the \"bad\" mate only wants to wait because of decorum, and the supposed good mate is committed to waiting until she's 18 bc he loves her, it's still absolutely disgusting for both of them. if I could give this book 0 ☆ I would. 0/10
 
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