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The MLs randomly regain their memories of their previous life at some point which makes them love our MC and turn away from orig!FL because they end up remembering her lifesaving favours from the past life. However, this just means they end up falling for her super quick, and I really like the process of falling for each other. Thus it's really unfortunate.
Furthermore, the master is someone that didn't belong in the "original story". I personally don't like when that happens because true stories always set the most powerful handsome guy as the ML, so how could this even better person suddenly pop out?? It also makes absolutely no sense to me how they got close... our MC is really a good person, but it really doesn't explain how they got THAT close.
[collapse]All that said, the story is still quite interesting. Translating team does a great job, and our MC is a good girl (albeit incre~dibly Mary Sue). This story is really a perspective thing; orig!FL seems annoying but that's only because we get the perspective of MC. From another perspective, MC would be the one that's a crazy mary sue.Edit: The more I read, the more Mary Sue she is, and more important the more powerful her old master becomes. Like I just can't get around the fact that somehow she found this super incredibly powerful and talented and also world-shockingly handsome master just lying around, and didn't really think anything of it...? idk man I just find it so ridiculous