The Healer Demands Payment! Chapter 113 Discussion

  • Thread starter DoomWriter
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  • #1
Starts out pretty good but the execution gets worse over time.

MC is ok, but she quickly becomes the halo'd chosen one with no self awareness of this despite realizing that the OGFL was one on her rebirth. Frankly everything becomes more and more contrived. The misunderstanding comedy stick always gets old real quick imo.

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Honestly not sure what the writer was going for with the OGFL. White lotus that gets her dues by being held hostage by some borderline psycho? but said psycho's motivations are questionable. He clearly wasn't in love with her like all the other males, and he was better at medicine than her (or at least understood poisons). So he didn't want her to heal him, was constantly annoyed by her, and didn't fit into his plans against the medical clans.... why was he dragging her around? So he could be saddled with her debts? Part of me is glad that the OGFL is dragged offscreen, but at the same time one wonders what the point was? If the author wanted to make a harem of past life patients there didn't need to be an OGFL.

Speaking of this Ji clan guy... how the hell is so easy for him to forceably remove the vines from people when they have been the scourge of the demon realm for 1000's of years that no one has been able to solve? At least the MC supposedly had to work at a cure for over a month in her past life? If brute force or array knowledge is all it took to cure this than why didn't any of the noble demon clans figure this out? And it's not really clear what his ultimate goal was with the medical clans. I mean sure he slapped them in the face and lowered their reputation, but was it really worth making all of them enemies? He didn't seem to want to make a rival medicine sect as the other characters theorized (not a medical cultivator in the first place). He didn't seem to want to seek a cure for his injuries as he kept quiet about it until the end (an after thought). Honestly it would have made more sense if he plotted against the refinery sects or showed off the power of arrays by joining some battle tournament.

Oh, the power of friendship! She friends with all her stalkers now! People she hardly knows or were borderline enemies in her past life! I gotta save them because it's her ninja-err I mean path of the Dao! Especially makes sense that she'd ditch the master she has been searching for all this time to save them. Joking aside it makes no sense why she couldn't just pass them a message and some medicine through that teleportation device when her master literally passes her something right after she jumps through it herself. The whole reason these supposed friends are even in this predicament is a lame comedy of errors/misunderstanding in the first place. I really think the writer was just looking for an excuse to drag out the romance subplot.

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  • #3
Awesome chapter, I wonder who she is going to end up with I like Carlos beter.
 
  • #6
Dawn is confused  She's  hugging Bryan. Ryder is on the phone
 
  • #10
Stop dragging out the storyline, hurry up and end it I’m beginning to feel just as tortured as Molly, will soon give up.
 
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