The Healer Demands Payment! Chapter 31 part1 Discussion

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2 1/2 stars.

Cannon fodder becomes FL second time around.

This book is well paced but also somehow draggy at the same time. It's just feels like it needs more action and pizzazz. It's an interesting concept and has some things that I haven't found common, but I still found myself getting bored.

This is one of those stories that you think seems good and has potential, but just feels like it's lacking. If there was a bit more punch, I think this could have been so much better. The FL is focused and obsessed with healing. But with no humor or fluctuations in her personality, she is more like a boring blank slate. She doesn't seem to have the social strategy or learnt anything from her previous time except the medical stuff and which guys to avoid. It just feels like there are so many wasted opportunities for these characters.

It's just a bit blah. I liked the premise, so will be seeing if I can find similar troupes, but I don't think I will be continuing this one. It's lackluster.

Spoiler

with 2 of the original FL's harem having their memories, it does add some interesting and different dynamics to the story which I did like, however, even though they were clear on their now antagonistic feelings towards the original FL and the love for the new FL, it feels like the author missed out on something that could have been interesting. They could have figured out that she had her memories by the way she acts different this time around. They could have had some great snarky banter as they tried to get her attention. But it just felt a bit like wasted potential.

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  • #2
Love love the Beta & I and Unexpectedly Mine both stories are amazing, no surprise there as I have loved all your stories. Can’t wait for the rest of the books I am here for them all. You’re amazing Cassandra M and thank you for the amazing stories you share with us ...️
 
  • #4
Leah no man is worthy enough to end your life for. You are stronger than you think
 
  • #5
Can we expect double daily updates please...... This story is already a slow burn(that's a good thing)but kindly update more often  Thank you.........️
 
  • #6
Great book. Lots of grammar errors but good, nonetheless.
 
  • #8
the story is so amazing. I wish it would move a little faster but it is so worth the slow burn. kinda
 
  • #9
Wahala!! This fight is getting more tougher. I feel for the children because they’ll be the ones to suffer at the end of the day. Please more updates author.
 
  • #11
Can't help myself from laughing the moment Selina just walked on her step mom like...why in the world would she do that? lmao... this character definitely rocks!

there's also this Jasper guy like a totally hot guy that's really interesting... I want to get to know more of them... more chapters!...
 
  • #12
Perfectly written! But would of liked to known who leaked the information and about their wedding. There is so much unsaid. Hope you write a follow up.
 
  • #13
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