The Support Ate it All Chapter 95 Discussion

Rating 4 star.

actuall rating 3.5 maximum score that I can give. Here is the explanation of the synopsis, good, and the bad of the novel

Premise : MC is a veteran player in a game, get notification for Reincarnation quest with Ex-rank difficulty. Proceed to reincarnated in academy setting then nurtured other character while growing his stat.

Here is the good part of the novel that may convince you to read it :

1. 1. OP protagonist
   2. Harem subplot with decent heroine writing.
   3. MC and other characters growth is hook point that attract you as a reader.
   4. Light read with progression on character growth.
   5. Slice of live.
   6. Decent writing on side character.

Now here cones the critics that lower this novel score to 3.5 in my opinion :

1. 1. Horrendous world building. The world building leave so much to be desired. Until this point the author make the world like it a game world. Like MC is reincarnated into the game world where all the system and everything working the same way like in the game. There is a clash how much believable a world setting and reality. The system that hold the rules for trait and skill looks too much like game in IRL setting creating this incongruity feeling in the setting itself.
   2. Unrealistic MC. When MC reincarnated in new world he immediately become a god all knowing entity never questioning whether the previously known system works after reincarnation. Some instance also don't make any sense, for example how come MC know all moves how to dodge/fight/cast magic in in his new reality. A good PC gamer doesn't mean you immediately become an athlete after reincarnated. Except the said game is one of those SAO or ultra realistic VR capsule thing involved, however author never mention that. This create a main character with thick plot armor like everything will work because the world setting is like that just suck it even it doesn't make any sense. There also some trait that that MC obtain in questionable ways like using hidden streak combo. This also include like how MC still look this world as a game and why he doesn't feel any attachment to IRL world so far that incongruity create some plot hole. Like why need to create everything same like how it work in a game. It would be better if there is something in system doesn't work in the world after reincarnation, because it will be more interesting that way. Not to mention create numerous plot hole.
   3. Story pacing. 95 chapter in and there is no huge progression that able to threaten MC. Why? Because all setting and story pacing happen in academy when the risk is low. The author approach this week by week with more focus in slow growth and SOL in the story. Now this is not necessary a bad thing. However when you only rely MC and other character growth as a hook to make people interested in the story without any meaningful conflict, people may get bored. If the reader looking for growth of the character they will stay. However if readers want a conflict that lead to MC struggle and overcome. People may already leave seeing there is no meaningful progress (in plot) after 95 chapter they might leave. In conclusion this is a story with slow progression.
   4. Focus of the story. Focus in this mean the main conflict or main direction of the story. So far we only showed growth of the MC and MC potential ally with no main antagonist of the story. The lack of the conflict in the bigger picture in the whole story create a possibility that author may fill the story of growth arc carry it to the left and right without to the point of the main conflict. It maybtake a while to get into the main conflict with penalties to the MC.

This is not a bad novel, however take a step back and re-think about it. The whole story and world building fall apart easily. The saving grace is some character writing is done well and hook on growth progression.

Edit : Numbering and some typo