- #1
The plot of this story had lots of potential but sadly it wasn’t executed well.I was particularly excited to read this one as I liked the author’s other completed work, but it was just disappointing. Although entertaining to some small degree, but for me, the peak of this story happened early in the novel and that wasn’t even the climax.Spoiler
The one where the FL is in Paris and accidentally calls out the name of her dead husband because she wanted him to see the double rainbow. The ML glances up at the sky and although she can’t hear or see him, answers, “Yes, I see the rainbow too.”
[collapse]None of the other scenes in the story was as riveting or as worthy after this one. And that is so disappointing as the author could have done so much more with the pretty plot.It’s like gawking at a beautifully wrapped gift box and upon opening it, only discovered plot holes and train wreck.
