- #1
Cringe. This fanfic was written like those Wuxia chinese novels, this is basically "One Piece made in china" lmao. It's a low quality junk food. MC had so many sword skills and named it with wuxia and chunni sounding names makes me cringe so hard. I can't handle seeing MC saying those names as if they're the coolest thing in the world. Oh for christ sake.Also, this isn't important but if author is Arab or Muslim MC's name would look natural, but changing Chinese name Li Fan and turning it into Rifan because Japanese doesn't have L sounds in it is another cringeworthy to note of how weaboo this sounds to me lol.Anyway it's hard to enjoy it mainly because it feels so awkward seeing One Piece characters to be full of praise for the MC's greatness and his chunni style swordsmanship. Aside from that the execution is terrible, the author fails to deliver the scenario properly. The story also showcases how OP and strong the MC is but for some reason I can't find myself to cheer for the MC and I can't really make myself to like him. I think the essence of One Piece and the feel was also completely gone. I gave two stars because despite being cringy and badly executed it's not completely garbage, but I sure feel like I will drop this any second while reading this.
