- #1
English is not my first language so sorry for any mistakes. This fanfic started very well, it was fun to see the protagonist exploring the world, challenging characters, messing up the timeline.But in the current chapter he simply became a narcissist who doesn't care about anything other than himself. Maybe he was always the one and it was me who took a while to notice.The point that's almost making me stop reading is now that he's met Shanks and is basically treating him like a prisoner to "reap the benefits" later, and the worst part of it all is that he acts like he's doing him a favor.The current chapters are pretty boring for me, he got the letter for another akuma no mi and I found it interesting, but so far I haven't found anything I like. These last chapters I read were me giving it one more chance, but I'm almost giving up.
