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I'm not going to harp on the MC's shitty character as I see plenty of reviews for that. There are two things I want to add because not many reviewers made it very far, deservedly so.His power inhibits any mental growth the character could have. If he ever doubts himself in ANY way his powers don't work correctly. He has to do mental gymnastics to not just immediately massacre some people to avoid his powers going awry. This could have been an interesting way to challenge the MC, but instead is more used to keep him from ever growing up. Plus, any anxiety this could have caused is washed away by his "other half" that can just wave away the mental corruption.Secondly, after a fairly normal paced beginning, the story just starts jumping around with no indication of why. There's tons of off screen happenings handwaved by, "He was out." One example is that he visits a shop owned by three dwarves who we have never met before, in a city that's never been mentioned before, and they are grateful to him for reasons that are literally never stated.It's not the worst thing I've ever read, but that's about as high as I can praise it.
