- #1
Like many of the other readers have said, the story got way too rushed. There is no kick or some kind of excitement now when you are reading the story. It all fell apart after he killed the princess and the king. Sure, he killed the important guys, but then what? Why couldn't he just gone and killed at least one classmate? That would keep them on edge, and frankly speaking? It would've been amusing as hell. Heck! You could've at least written a chapter based on the student's POV. Well? Won't say much anymore.