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For summary, the story has a very good concept, revenge, forbidden power, the victim and the bully but it has bad execution. The MC has inconsistent values, character development where he's obsessed with revenge but then doubt if he should really do it. He executed the revenge and having some sort of self- conflict throughout the arc. Bad side characters development, his parties are more or less yes man where they know what he had done was wrong, try to reprimand him but later just followed his decision under pretext "live with your own decisions". Not to mention, they know he's strong and with his miserable attitude, he gonna gathered enemies yet still have no effort to improve oneself especially Toa. There are more but my advice is to read yourself n judge it appropriately
