Reincarnated into a Game As the Hero’s Friend Chapter 20 part2 Discussion

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  • #1
The translation is well done. There is an interesting plot - good enough to machine translate past the translation. The story would be a 5 star if it didn't suffer from infodumpitis. Its just like diarrhea, but with explosive bouts of extraneous information that runs down the legs of the story. Large segments of chapters can be skipped because they are just history lessons or "world structure comparisons to other points of history" which have nothing to do with the here and now (and most times, the later) of the story. The writer is just showing off how knowledgeable about history and the time they spent thinking up the world. 2 stars knocked off for that.
 
  • #3
Yay Zander is really claiming her
 
  • #5
i love this story, during the time when i read this book, i feel like living in the story myself.
 
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