- #1
MC's family life is non-stop two-dimensional whump until ML rescues her and she wins over his people thru MC-halo powers.ML is very affirming towards MC (which I think is unrealistic given his bg and lack of familial & social support), but otherwise all the characters are flat tropes. The story is cliched.chapters are really short (1-2 min reads) and TL's site is riddles with intrusive pop-ups. TL is legible but needs some proofreading, as pronouns and 1st/3rd person pov mix-ups distract from the reading.