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I can't believe I force myself to read chapter 201.I like how the story first started off for the first 30 chapters or so.Then, everything went downhill like the MC doesn't have any more brain power.Sure, he is splitting his mental and physical strength between writing his novel and being a student in a school that takes no-sh*t from half-ass students in a country that has nobles and kings. I do understand the stresses that an environment like that can cause for modern society, people who are used to freedom and no obligation to serve someone who is higher in social status than them.However. the fact of the matter was that the MC is f*cking damn 40 years old inside. When he dies, he is old enough to understand human society. His mental strength as an Author and a Writer in the modern-day society of Earth isn't supposed to be a joke. But what happens when he goes to school and meets other people? It's like his brain is dead and gone; worse, he feeds his mentality thinking strength into a dog's mouth.He can sense that the woman around him thinks of him differently, but what does he do? Form a f*cking damn harem? His parents are in a one-to-one relationship; where the f*ck does he get the idea that having multiple wives is a good idea? Does he care for them? As what? A friend? Or because of their looks? Does he even f*cking damn love them as an individual?I read until chapter 201, and all that I found was the author and the MC seems to view women as nothing more than stepping stone.Especially Cecil, the demon princess who was next on the throne. Really... this person could have been a great character, but in the end, she's like a copy-and-paste girl who has a large burst, high magical power, and high social status, and that was it. Where the f*ck is her Individuality as a person who has lived for 100+ years? She has very good memories... but where the f*ck was her mentality and comprehension skills? Does she like the MC? After reading Chapter 201 three times over, I found that Cecil's IQ seems to decrease the longer she interacts with the MC. It doesn't feel genuine but rather far too much like plot force.Marie is another story. Sure, her feelings feel more genuine to the MC, but the opposite isn't true. Sure, the MC's character is the type that won't initial anything when it comes to relationships in romance-wise, but f*cking damn seriously, he's far too much of a pushover when it comes to pretty ladies. It feels like his feeling was very half-assed and like he was just going with the flow of things. Like, what the f*ck? Dude, you're f*cking damn more than 30+ years old mentally! Where the f*ck is your character development?!!! You're a human who lives during the Modern Age of Technology and information advancement; how the f*ck did you turn into a f*cking damn naive little boy who turned his brain and thinking off when meeting with pretty ladies?Sure, that society is based on Noble and such social classes, but if you are going to use the society itself as a f*cking damn excuse, then f*cking damn play by its rules. Don't f*cking damn half-ass it. You made the society of that time period seem f*cking damn s*upid. Like their society didn't exist for any more than 100 years when, in fact, it had for more than 500 years!Does the Emperor and their intelligent gathering of spies seem that f*cking damn s*upid? Was the Scholar and Wise Men of that Age f*cking eat their brain cell for the past 500 years? Was magic just there to eat their brain cell? f*ck, the MC made the intelligence of that world seem like it doesn't think outside of the boxes at all.There are literally Gods in that world. Why the f*ck does it seems like the gods wanted that world to go to shit?Anyway, the longer I read this novel, the more problems I seem to foresee and think of.The Plot Devices for the MC are seriously starting to make me want to throw my PC away.All in all, here's my rating:Character Development: 2 StarsWorld Building: 3 StarsHow much I enjoy reading this: 3 Stars.Would I recommend this: No.Would I reread this again: No
