The Villain Who’s Sat on and Abused Until He Runs Out of Strength ~That Time They All Fell for Me When I Started Scoring Points With the Protagonist~ Chapter -- Discussion

  • #1
Personal opinion but I can never get into these “make the devoted lover of fake MC love real mc”. First half where they still love the og it just feels like ntr, ur literally forced to watch them flirt 24/7. Then when the heroines started falling for MC its just a starting point of another novel at that point. The first half of the story might as well as not be there. Idk.
 
  • #2
I am confused.  The title say Alpha Daryl.  But this story so far is only about Ashley and how she doesn't trust Daryl.  I'm just not sure with all the distrust Daryl and Ashley will ever be.  Maybe this book needs a different title?
 
  • #3
Great book with wonderful details. This book grabs your attention from the beginning. Must read an not a short book
 
  • #6
I can’t wait to read this. Just finished book 1 and babyyyyyyyy it was giving me life!!!! I felt like I was sitting around with my cousins. Loved every minute of it!!!
 
  • #7
Love the story! And I can see your writing skills honed as you create new stories. Keep Up The good work. I read this straight in 10 Hours! Haha! While waiting for the update of your latest book =).
 
  • #8
I've enjoyed the book but I find it dragging now and becoming boring. It's time to end this novel and move on.
 
  • #12
Numerous errors in it definitely doesn’t worth the amount stolen by you. An additional $1.00 is taken out for every $4.99 and $27.00 is taken where &9.99 was asked for. What is the cost of this book?
 
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