Boss Level Face-slapping Specialist [Quick Transmigration] Chapter 18 Discussion

  • #1
I like the concept, but the story is.... Hm. Rushed and slightly boring. There's too much telling and not showing. Too little dog food, too rough, it's overall not that cute.

It rushes over the minor scenes, only showing a bit of emotion in major reveals or scenes. The thing is, those tiny scenes are what makes me actually really want to read it. Romance is supposed to be cute! Not a series of events.

I love big boss protagonist spoiling cute FL stories, but this wasnt executed very well.
 
  • #3
This is getting really tiring!!! Waiting for the writer to write!!
 
  • #6
read all the alpha series'loved them all fantastic books beautifully written well done.. would LOVE a book for Dante ... ... it'll be the best one ......️...️...️
 
  • #9
This story makes no sense! I’m confused! The concept is good but the characters are so confusing and ridiculous!
 
  • #10
What makes me mad is Weston Sacraficed Stella and their child for Guin and her child only for Guin to murder said child(his baby brother) a year later just to frame her for it. Truth still hasn't came out yet and now the baby is dead.  I want Stella's uncle to pay for what he did to her as well.
 
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