Death Progress Bar Chapter 121 Discussion

  • #1
I really love this story. I've reread it multiple times and still do so. I can only recommend.

Characters:

All the characters have their own personality and are fleshed out. You can really feel and root for them. Their actions are also always logical and not just good for a certain scene. Even the side Characters get fleshed out and have their own backstory so it never feels like their just here for a few chapters and just evaporate like that. They all get their ends tied up nicely. The MC is not (too) op which I love because it allows him to be vulnerable without it being senseless. He's naive but still has common sense and is a hard worker. You can follow his train of thought and his interactions with the system are nice as well.

The ML is just a Super dreamy husband material. I'm not gonna write to much cuz I don't wanna spoil anything but he's SUCH a Cutie. His interactions with the MC are so sweet. You can feel him falling in love with the MC and you actually feel the love between them.

Spoiler

The Brothers are by far my favorite for obvious reasons and the relationship between them all is so well written that I didn't even know what to do.

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Plot/ Pacing:

The story is really interesting. It has multiple arcs and the pacing in each of them is super good. There's foreshadowing and the timeliness lines up perfectly as well. As in if the MC asks for information it's not just there by the next day. It takes time to gather and it doesn't feel rushed at all. The atmosphere while reading is super nice as well because it's just so well written that it's easy to get immersed.

Translation:

Nothing to say aside from how good it is translated. With all it's notes and everything. I'm really grateful that they took their time to put out such good quality work even if it takes time.

This is legit my favorite story and I keep coming back to it especially since I'm still waiting for new chapters. It's almost finished though so there's that. I didn't really wanna write this much but I just have to let everyone know that I can't stop reading, thinking and talking about this novel. My friends are really sick of it by now 😂
 
  • #2
Good day... it is an interesting novel for me... Just keep on updating because the story is good so far...
 
  • #3
Author please don't keep me waiting with updates....
 
  • #9
very nice and interesting to read this kind of novel and I love to read it every time I am not busy with my work
 
  • #10
Good storyline but spelling of some words are bad as the sound is same but totally different word & meaning... I have to correct the words as I read the sentences in my mind ^_^
 
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