Seirei Gensouki ~Konna Sekai de Deaeta Kimi ni~ Chapter 140 Discussion

  • Thread starter Averycammy17
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  • #1
I quite liked the novel at first and still probably like it, the story is decent as well as the characters. BUT and there's a huge but, the author is using dumb stuff to stall the plot and make it advance in the direction she wants, like the MC suddently trusting someone he doesn't know anything about, about one of the most important thing in the plot (well you see where this would be going) while he's quite distrustfull the whole time about nearly anyone and anything.

The story gets better once you get past the beginning (maybe 20+ chapters) but don't expect something revolutionary or brimming with originality.

 
  • #2
Congrats on the baby!!! I have been holding off on starting this because I know once I start I can’t stop. I’m so glad I just figured out you wouldn’t be posting before starting this and causing myself to have menty b when I ran out of chapters and realized you wouldn’t be posting for while!! Xoxo
 
  • #4
action packed first chapters. im sure the MCs intrigued your readers as i was. curious to find out more about their backstories. some typos and punctuation issues in the chapters but im sure u will be able to sort them out easily ? nice story and best of luck you r almost at 100k words?
 
  • #9
I haven't read it yet but it seems interesting
 
  • #10
too many grammatical issues. please have someone proof read your story.
 
  • #12
Sounds like a middle schooler rambling
 
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