I Became a Genius Swordsman in the Pretty Girl Game Chapter -- Discussion

  • #1
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Quite good story I would say, about MC that sent into the game world.

Reverse common sense GAL game world where the male were weaker than woman in physical body, so the woman are the more dominant role in the hunting party in world where gate appears, while male mostly have support role instead.

The story itself quite the usual troupe now, gate themed, monsters and stuff, unfortunately the TL bit of a mess, like the rice soup -> soup -> Gukbap -> Soup, geebus just use the korean pronunciation.

The TL sometimes make the conversation bit confusing as you need to proofread it in your mind before understanding what they talking.

And its only 34 chapters (as this review posted) so still early to rate, as the story mainly in academy so it usually filled with filler, even the first villain's minions haven't appeared yet.

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Edit: The TL fixed the translations, as for the nickname TL picked to use 'Soup' for the nickname of one of the FML, and also fixed those confusing conversation (still prefer it in Korean pronunciation for the 'Soup' *iirc 'Gukbap'*, this is just my personal preference) xD
 
  • #4
This got my attention right from the start. The story is unique and very promising.
 
  • #5
i like it. but please dont make it so long , elastic and erotic type. just full of courage , adventure , love and affection is  enough like till now.
 
  • #10
i love it!!!! i would like to see an extended epilogue confirming the # of kids they had and life after
 
  • #11
Hurry up hurry back to get ready for more chapters please
 
  • #12
This book, and the previous one in this series,  were so fun to read. Can't wait for the next book, Alpha Jax! Looking forward to spending time with some of the other peripheral characters in this world...
 
  • #13
It’s so intense. Good book . I can never wait for the next chapter .
 
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