- #1
This novel had the potential to be something much more, but it's completely squandered by poor writing and an even worse translation. It's disappointing to see such a high rating because it feels misleading—this is a below-average novel with a translation that makes reading it a frustrating experience. Sure, I've encountered worse translations before, but this one still left me with a lingering headache and a deep sense of frustration.One of the biggest issues is how the protagonist gets s**ked into the game world as a weak character, only to instantly receive upgrades through his in-game inventory within a single chapter. This power-up feels completely unearned, robbing the story of any real tension or growth. While it's nice that he has to learn how to use his new abilities and adjust to his physical body, that's about the only redeeming part. The rest feels like a lazy shortcut.On top of that, the way he interacts with the female leads is just plain s*upid. His attempts to get close to them are poorly thought out and lack any charm or realism. It's frustrating to see so many elements in the story that could have been explored, but they're simply glossed over or wasted.I don't mind the harem genre, but this one is particularly grating. The novel introduces characters with backstories but fails to give them any real depth or intelligence. Every character is forgettable, as their motivations and personalities feel shallow. The protagonist is supposed to be mysterious, but his actions and decisions lack any sense, making it hard to connect with or understand him. His motivation is barely explained, and the combat scenes feel mediocre at best. The author doesn't know how to tell a suspenseful or thrilling story—this would've worked better as a mid-tier slice of life.Overall, the novel feels like a missed opportunity, like so many other novels on this site.
