- #1
There's no plot. If there is, it's burried in the endless fillers that made this novel possible.There is no direction at all, and there are information we were given that seems like foreshadowing but no, it never came up again.e.g.Spoiler
When ML is drunk his Yang energy is weak so FL can still see ghosts even when he's around, drunk.
Where else is this information used? NOWHERE! Wtf!
[collapse]SpoilerWhat happened to Candy man, his factory and inheritance?
[collapse]The author can't seem to figure out which part of story s/he should focus on. There's too much s/he wanted to cover, but writing was mediocre so it just felt like a chore, at around Chapter 60 onwards, it got so boring, and novel had no business being a 140+ chapters.After all that filler SpoilerWhen FL & ML fell into comma, I'm like, meh, whatever
[collapse]The rate is for the effort of the translator to painstakingly translate this novel, because otherwise, one star is already generous.