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Haha where's the logic of this story? The FL's uncle is a very successful and famous novelist, but the FL got duped as she wanted to become a novelist too? Girl, just ask your uncle to make a connection, you don't need to go to the capital to be fooled by your friend.There are many loopholes from the beginning.Next, she has lived with her uncle (guardian) since she was 5 yo. Yo, you didn't even write a letter to him? An Ungrateful Brat.Next, if ML is that powerful as being described by the author, he would not got confused/ duped by his household butler's little trick (Mrs Gurstrade) saying that FL has a man outside.Gosh, ML is a human too. But, as ML is too overpoweredly described, him being decieved by such a trick is too low.