The Correct Way of Face-Slapping in Transmigration Chapter 22 Discussion

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  • #1
A Quick Transmigration story, with the MC out to take revenge on the Heavens (similar to QWTFoD), but just from the first arc, it doesn't seem to be well written. Just because MC (or the prev host) hates certain people, it doesn't make their education/work experience so worthless that they have to resort to prostitution and die of AIDS!

Also, typical cold overbearing yandere ML! MC is initially introduced as a well-experienced adult after 30, 000 worlds, who thinks it would be fun to play with ML, and then, a few chapters later, he's supposed to be virg*n through all those worlds, and suddenly goes doki doki for the ML! And again, we have marital r*pe as an expression of ML's deep love for MC, and MC just forgives ML for it!
 
  • #3
Always a twist and turn. This is why I Veronica Fox. Next up Rise to the Thrown
 
  • #4
Good storyline, but the grammar is trash. Needs proofreading.
 
  • #6
I don't know why but I don't want Lilianna to be with Marco.........I want him to be with someone else
 
  • #9
Great story line of a beautiful love. There were often too many unnecessary details that didn’t really move the story along, but nicely written.
 
  • #10
Good read. Can tbe author please upload chapters more frequently
 
  • #11
I just read the first 9 chapters can't proceed with the next chapters huhu :(, but the story is pretty good. I like it. :)
 
  • #12
This is the ending? Really?!! Why?! There are still some things needs to be done
 
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