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The premise is interesting and the writing/translation are generally well done.The problem is the worldbuilding, or rather the lack thereof. I'm now 25 chapters in and I have no idea what the MCs world is like. I know that they have schools, I know that they have crystal orbs and 10 chapters in I learned that they have cultivation array communicators, so presumably they're advanced in magitech?Just in general everything about this novel is bland. If you enjoy reading about the evolution of life on earth for 10 chapters or about tribes curbstomping their rivals because a literal god whispers modern scientific knowledge and tactics into their ears then you might like this, but it got boring for me after a few dozen chapters, because there's just no hook here.
