- #1
4/5The overall translation is rough with many wrong words and ineligible sentences. The plot is great while the execution is poor. The author didn't balance the scene between reality and the planet well. MC lacks basic interaction with various characters. The MC's daily life is missing. Often, there is no information regarding the real world at all. Whether how high the real world technological development is, the native doesn't know about explosive while they already have spacecraft. How many countries exist, do they live on multiple planets, who is the strongest planet master as a reference, and what gain do you get when having a strong planet? The basic groundwork and lore are very incomplete which leaves readers unable to visualise the story well.Edit: It's actually getting a bit less tedious later and more real-world interactions were shown. Most of the above missing lore is somewhat mentioned but not in detail. The writing is still a bit weak. I am willing to bump the score up by 0.5.
