- #1
The story's concept is very unique and would be far better if it was executed in the right hands. But this author instead struggles to portray a meaningful story with characters that are worth remembering as they get killed or die of old age within 20-40 chapters without much character development. The story is essentially an omnipotent view on evolution but it is basically just a carbon copy of Earth's history with minor changes and pre-existing ideas from other people's work (E.g. Vibranium from Black Panther.) And furthermore the story goes on huge info dumps for tens of chapters and any antagonist for the story are genuinely s*upid and overly arrogant. It also seems like why ever the author runs out of idea he just uses some competition so the MC can be doglicked more. Overall the story would be one of the best stories out there if the execution was done well and the author wasn't just using the Chinese writer meta for online novels for adding as much useless and dead words as possible to fulfill the word criteria so they can earn more money. (I get it's for a side job or a full time job, but honestly it is a disappointment that minimal effort was put into the story.)
