the editing could use some work but for the most part, it's easy to comprehend. the story itself though... sheesh! the little hints at characters and storylines are nothing compared to how they're actually revealed. so far so good. keep it up!
Is this story about Blake now . I am so tired I think it has been more than 100 chps and there is still nothing about Madelyn. I guess the author has changed the lead. it is so irritating ...
