Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou (WN) Chapter 7 Discussion

  • #1
It started really good,

he was betrayed, sent into the dungeon, alone.

The first volume was really good.

Then it all went to SH**T

common shounen troupes, he friggin gets a daughter myuu... =.=

Seriously, why?

he just gets pushed around, doesn't retaliate against other people much, even gets scared from a muscled woman. REALLY?!

If it was a slice of life, I would have understood, but this is just taking a good novel and throwing it to the tr*sh.

It wouldn't be worth reading, considering how mad it will make you feel.
 
  • #2
made it to chapter 11 then called it quits. the main character is too weak and doesn't learn. she's starving for attention that she excepts bad treatment as good treatment. the story is repetitive and the only characters I've seen were main, alpha and the sister and parents. gets boring, n im angry
 
  • #3
I'm sure the storyline is really good. But it's so poorly written I couldn't get past the first 2 chapters. Asside from the gramma and spelling (I'm not the best at either), most sentences don't make sense without internal editing along the way. almost like a child has written it.
 
  • #4
nine months pregnancy does not miscarriage,its either they both loss their life, she loss the baby, or loss her life. so how did she miscarriage?
 
  • #5
this story is so nice ang ganda ng plot kung pano niya iniligar sa bawat scenes ng mga characters
 
  • #7
Love the idea behind the book but is frustrating to read because all the characters are idiots. DNF
 
  • #8
The story is catchy but had I known that only 500 words were to be released once a week, I would have never started reading it. Please release at least 4-5 times a week if the chapters are going to be so short.
 
  • #10
the editing could use some work but for the most part, it's easy to comprehend. the story itself though... sheesh! the little hints at characters and storylines are nothing compared to how they're actually revealed. so far so good. keep it up!
 
  • #11
I love this book very interesting but too long hope there will be ending soon
 
  • #13
Is this story about Blake now . I am so tired I think it has been more than 100 chps and there is still nothing about Madelyn. I guess the author has changed the lead. it is so irritating ...
 
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