I’ll Make It A Bad Ending Like A Villain

  • Thread starter Zefyr
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  • #26
I read until chap 6
Can someone tell me who the ml ? I wanna support the couple while reading and don’t wanna read if the ml is that damn cp 
 
  • #29
As I contine to read the novel, I get annoyed at FL for like....... Her inner monologue is soooo spiteful and annoying, like she got no better things to do other than hating on Henry, even choking him while he was unconcious. I mean, yeah, he killed her lots of times, but in this lifetime, we havent got a glimpse of his thoughts..... 
 
  • #31
So after we got a glimpse of his thought in this lifetime, are we supposed to 'understand' him then? Then what about the FL, she was 1st executed, 2nd strangled, 3rd stabbed, and finally commit suicide in the 4th life, who is gonna 'understand' her then? You expect her to be sane after going through all that, aren't you being biased here, I mean if we are going to justified Henry because he was abused as a child, that's why he didn't hesitated to frame, used, kidnapped and killed 'INNOCENT' people for his vendetta in all those TL in which FL fall victim to it twice, to be fair, shouldn't we justified FL too for hating on Henry even choking him while he was sick? 
 
  • #32
I didn't say it was. I was merely commenting on the chapter itself after giving an overview. I also indicated that it was based on personal preferences rather than passing judgment on people that don't mind the theatrical approach. If you've read my comments on this thread so far, that is the format that I have been using as well.
Anyway, I hope that you've found some good reads of late. There are so many kind people working on these English-language fan translations. 
 
  • #33
Reading and writing regularly helps me greatly (advice from some writer folk). I also found that reading aloud assisted a lot. I find myself doing both because the first helps you learn what you like about wordcraft (a bit of a pretentious word but it seems to fit the best) and the second allows you to see if a piece of writing makes sense by making use of multiple senses (sight and sound). If what you've written sounds weird, then it will most likely read well. 
 
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