Tsuyoi01 said:
yurkin said:
Ik it's horror manga but small detail bugs me. Ik he's captivated by her beauty and the way he acted was like under hypnosis state buuuut even if his will is in more strengthened state is his will NOT his body that got strengthener. His body would freeze more sooner from the cold than it did in reality, seriously my hands freeze after washing on the water tub outside what to say about walking with hours in the snowy mountain during a raging snow storm only wearing boxers. Seriously author have you seen and felt cold?? Ik it's psychological motive all with the purpose of showing the stretch of Tomie's beauty but idgaf. Fees like author wants the reader to hate Tomie for what she does or rather how she does affect the ones near her, especially the men but that doesn't work in such environment as the one in this chapter. I think you're two chapters wrong. You might write this on chapter 5It depends on what release you are reading. You can see the various releases here. The one I'm reading also has the chapter titled Revenge as the 7th one.