Ultimate Support

I really enjoyed the world-building and the unique concept of your story. The way you introduced the characters made them feel real and engaging, and the pacing kept me hooked. However, there were moments where the exposition felt a bit heavy, slowing down the momentum. Some parts could benefit from more natural dialogue to enhance the flow. Overall, it’s a great read with a lot of potential—I’m excited to see how the story develops!

So far, the story has a great start and I enjoy the characters, even if I would like some more messing around. But regardless, a great story.

" Be considerate brother, it's like we were with other people"

"oy you, wannabe knight… You do realize that you nearly got your lady killed, don't you?"

Hammy also sat down, "I bet he can wait to see yours."

"And how do I do that...?"

Well, keep going. I cannot guarantee you will like what you find, but THEY will definitely find you eventually, so get ready because it's gonna be a hell of a ride.

<p>Song Hyun-Shik kept looking at her carefully, studying her expression. She seemed calm enough for him, but there was a storm brewing inside her, he knew. He wanted to say something about what happened earlier, but for the life of him, he just didn't know what to say. Finally, he cleared his throat.</p>