Towards the East

A wonderful, beautiful and amazing book. I liked all the elements of psychological and cosmic horror, drama and philosophy. I wish you success and resistance to the disease. You are a project for a historical writer like H.P. Lovecraft.

the story line is so good this book has the potential to shine so author update it constantly

okay it's obvious authority has learnt from his mistakes as of now everything is good and going well

Just wow! Pretty good writing and efforts. Fantastic world built and characters. Got hooked at the first chapter itself. Greed is a lovely character!.  Though I suggest to keep each chapter length between 1000-1500 for better flow and consistency.

Saat Berada di depan pintu Shiro Merasakan Energi yang sangat kuat

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Setelah bengong beberapa saat melihat si MIB keluar dari apartemen, ardan membawa tas hitam kecil ke area dekat jendela, dan membukanya, terdapat ID Card, beberapa kartu yang menyerupai voucher, dan surat-surat, yang mencolok hanya 1, yang terdapat tulisan "Dari dokter Nahren"

   "Mother.. I'm so sorry, Mother. Oh who did this to you." He said, his voice shaking. He threw the newspaper aside and sat himself on the edge of the bed. Feeling tired and exhausted, He wiped his eyes and laid his back beside his siblings.