TO BE FRANK

Después de bastante tiempo al fin puedo continuar leyendo esta historia la cual me hace tener emociones de todo tipo junto con los personajes.

as of 7 chapters all I can say that it has ridiculously good grammar and a unique concept. I'm sure the power system would be great, but only if it was explained, I might be saying this too early cuz he might explain it later, but I feel that if he told it later that it would be too late. I feel like the author is skipping a lot of scenes, cuz a lot of the flow doesn't feel natural, like him meeting basically god to just ending up in a baby body being tortured, or a fight that was about to ensue and next chapter has basically forgotten about it. the synopsis is useless, cuz I'm ch 7 and the only thing that has appeared from the synopsis is the name Michael, he wasn't even a game developer

gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

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<p>"Got it."</p>

"Ok class dismissed," You pack your bag and stand up. You look at your side and looking at him sleeping. So you decided to wake him up. "Umm... Class d-dismissed," You stuttered when he open his eyes. "Wow, his eyes are beautiful". You thought. "Oh, I never see you before, You new here?" "Yea, I just transfer," You give a smile. "I have to go, see you tomorrow," You wave at him and exit through the door.

''May I know the miss' name?'' He asked her.

Several minutes passed like this before the blood moon began to fade. Shouts of joy could be heard all over the city. But Jeremiah couldn't rejoice, not yet. His wife was still in labour, he was still very worried.