The Winter's Queen

i'm not yet done with the 1st chapter and I already stopped reading.I don't want to be this kind of person but please fix the grammar. there are alot of it as well as misspelled words which is irritating and makes me loose interest.

Rating this book a 5-Star, because why not? I simply love the way I'm able to relate with the characters and picture the scenes in my head. The plot is so interesting, and it always has a major cliffhanger that keeps me turning at the end of every chapter. Honestly, you're doing well authoress P Star. Keep it up. Also, I love the fan name, 'Starlites'. Write on authoress💕💕💕

It’s a great novel i just hate Magus, Amoria and the mc.For example he didn’t even do anything when found out that his scum of a BESTFRIEND (Magus the hero) was sleeping with his girl. And no one in the party even told him what was happening. And now the girls from his former party are probably going to be throwing themselves at him. The only reason they’re doing that is because Magus is dead. And he’s not even mad, so you should get why a lot of people hate mc. Hes just not likable. I like your other novels but the mc in this one I loathe I only read this because I wanted him to get revenge after getting cucked by his bestfriend. And he doesn’t even act coldly when he meets his party members again, he just acts like their his friends that he hasn’t seen in a long time. But what kind of friends doesn’t tell you that your girlfriend is sleeping with your boyfriend Does he have no sense of pride, no self respect. He even realized that Alicia the demon queen was just trying a new method but noo he’s to much of a coward to go back and confront. And instead he goes back to that thot Amoria. It’s honestly pathetic.

to be honest, if it was just about caring it around I'm confident that me, from a past life, would handle that easily, but she's going to travel with it for like, I don't know, weeks?!

"Hope I'm not late to the party" Cassandra announced palming her weapons. She had to hold her composure at the sight of Marcos decapitated body. Goodbye old friend. She thought.

The two monkeys finally reached a climax after fifteen minutes of fighting before Novi finally lowered his head to Ibn's chest.

He then walked 2 doors down and arrived in front of a door which was more secure than any other room in the entire facility. As Escanor opened the door, after looking at the retinal eye scanner. He saw his uncle who turned and smiled at him.

"I can make food with a touch of my hand." As if to proof her point she touched the school's canteen table, causing it to turn into cake.