The Survivor's Crusade

Ok writing, ok story so far, a little confusing at first but I think it could get better.

look so much better than cringe novel 🤣 it has potential to be a top novel

Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars.the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.)  After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...Thank you 💝💝...signed: shameless/crazy author...

It was at the time when Takashi went to his Mansion that evening. In a place located far away from Japan, sounds of murmurs reverberated to the whole room. It was crowded with people wearing white cloaks, white gloves and white caps and they all wearing a 'shocked' face as they watched a scene towards a certain large monitor located on the center of the place.

The dream which he wanted to become real.. In the dream which he was hugging a girl whom he loved from the bottom of his heart.. When he felt his dream was getting interrupted, he regained conscious and saw his maid wiping his body.. He frowned his eyebrows in anger..

I look at the window reflection and saw a giant monster with six bloodshot eyes, my weapon-like tail, my puffy white fur, raising my hands to see folded arms with claws at the end while my body slouches a weird way...

       "Just call me Cole

I stared at my hand again that still have some left-over electricity zapping around my finger, then shrugged.